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Confession

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Confession




Can I tell you a secret?

I don't love you
I don't, and I never did
Sorry to burst your bubble,
and snap you out of your daze


Heh, why the shocked face?

Did you think this was true love?
Meant forever and ever
That we would grow up old?
And be together forever


Well, you were certainly wrong

Life ain't always a love song
Learn that
There's no such thing as 'lifelong'
Accept that


Oh dear, did you fall for it?

When I said 'I love you',
did you really believe it?
When I kissed you back,
did you think that I mean it?


My, my, did I break your heart?

Sorry, life's like that
Sometimes black, others white
So pick up the shards and place them back
Deal with it, grow up and be a man


Why, yes, I'm a heartless bitch

And I don't expect you to understand
the reasons behind all of this
Nor do I expect you to try
to see the world from my perspective


Just... leave me alone

In my own little pity world
Leave me to grief over my pain,
along with this bottled up hate


that has consumed my heart away...
:iconhitlerwtfplz: wtf did I just write?

Anyways, have you ever wondered what leads a person to be... well, this kind of bitchy way or Idk any other kind of mean way? I have... and personally I think it can be insecurity, past traumas, or any other emotional or mental problem.

For this poem I chose to write from the perspective of a girl that has been used and trashed many times by men. This can be interpreted as you wish but I think this is something more like a revenge thing.

I had been carrying the idea in my head for a looong time... one day I was eating cereal, wondering why some girls just went out with boys for a little period of time and then trashed them with no apparent reason but a 'I don't feel the same way anymore' or 'We need to take some time', and pufft... it just popped out

So...

Did you like it? If you didn't then, why? I apreciate constructive criticism =D. And, have you met someone similar to this girl? I really hope you haven't...
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Troublinator's avatar
"have you ever wondered what leads a person to be... well, this kind of bitchy way or Idk any other kind of mean way?"

YES,yes,totally yes >.<
Such a beautiful poem... ;^;